kissy

This is a nice job I really like it, even though:

The black haired girl's left hand and wrist look almost unnatural as for her hairs above the left shoulder.Her left sock's two folds they kinda lack of shadows.Her eyebrows should look more realistic i think.

The redhead's right leg should not ends that high (with ends i mean the part near the foot) and while always talking about that leg the final and under part could be done better by you.Her right buttock is a bit blurred and maybe is way too thin it should probably be more blump.

That's it for me I do not mean offense.
I apologize for my bad english, and and I hope that you go on making these beautiful works.