I really enjoy this piece. It has a lot of attitude and I think it portrays the point of it rather well.

Let me start off with what I think could be improved:

First, I'd have to say the bottom half of her hair. At the top, the texturing is wonderful and it looks real, but when you reach the bottom portion it seems to be more papery and unrealistic. It doesn't seem to have a natural flow to it and seems to be stiff and floating.

The second thing I think could use improvement is the writing on the shirt. It doesn't seem to fall into the texturing of the shirt and seems too blurry to be actual script on a shirt. It's a little hard to look at because of the blur. I think that if the lettering was clearer and it had either it's own texture or the shirts texture, that it would look a lot more realistic.

The only other quelm I have with it is the hands placement. I'm not sure if she's supposed to actually be grabbing her crotch area or if she's holding it out a bit to symbolize something being there. If she's actually grabbing her crotch area, then the hand doesn't seem to be close enough to the area. As it is, it appears floating. Also, for the way her pants are appearing to be drawn down by something, I'd assume that it was by her thumb being stuck in them. I think the hem would be a little less angled if that weren't the case.

As for what I really like:

I love her facial expression. I think you nailed it dead on. Her eyes really draw you in and her smirk makes it tie together.

I also like the texturing done to the jeans. They look like a real pair of jeans.

I think the overall shading of the piece was done exceptionally well and that there are folds and creases in areas they should be.

Overall, I think the piece is very well done. It comes across with the point on the shirt and the character's look and pose are believable. I hope my critique was ok by you. I don't mean to offend if anything was said that you didn't like. These are just my observations.

I hope you can benifit from what I said, or you can just blow it off. Thank you for taking the time to read it.

Oh, and here are the reasons for my ratings:

Vision: 4 stars because it's a good piece, but it's not really awe-inspiring. (I don't mean any offense by that. I'm just saying that while it's a good piece, it's more on the simplistic side.)
Originality: 4 stars because she's your own character and you were able to get the point of the pic across.
Technique: 4 1/2 stars because overall, the technique was very good, but there's always room for improvement as is expected with art.
Impact: I rated this 5 stars because the piece accomplished what it set out to do. It got the point across and you can really feel from her expression and body language what the shirt was saying.

Hi There,

My only con is that the breasts feel a bit stiff and too uniform as if they were implants. Adding a little gravity an diversity to your figures will create realism and more interesting subjects. Please consider that not all models are young, with perfect bodies. Little imperfections may be the cherry on top!

Furthermore, this piece is one of my favorites in your gallery!!!
I really enjoyed this concept and the angle presented in. The message reads quite well from the expression to the text.
The textures are quite amazing and very well executed.

Great job and keep up the good work!!!