To clarify, she (my wife) meant more of a pronounced collar bone for Saphy's body size and weight her collar bone seems more to fit someone a lot heavier. (She went gaga over this pic)
For all the renditions of Saphy, this is the most natural one yet. The only negative thing I would say is that the collar bone area needs a bit of a touch up, otherwise it is wonderful. She looks beautiful and real. The dress flows from her properly and proportionately. BTW, this is my wife's opinion, she doesn't have a Deviant account and after seeing all of Saphy as I have that is what she had to say